Sunday, November 29, 2009

ToonDoo


3 comments:

  1. I loved that you picked this urban legend! I thought about doing it myself. Great job at adding all of the little extras in. I do wish you would have been a little clearer though. I was confused with whether it was dream or reality at some points. The comic as whole turned out great though! Excellent job!

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  2. I agree with Catherine. Narration needed on frames with no dialog and more proofreading on the grammar and mechanics.

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  3. Cedric, I really enjoyed looking at your comic. It was pretty funny. I really liked how you explored the different types of characters that toondoo offers. I especially liked the big head on the basketball court. I suggest that next time you place motion lines somewhere in your comic. When the character was playing basketball, you could have placed lines behind the image to show the speed/movement of the character. Great job presenting in class, and overall a great job!

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