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I loved that you picked this urban legend! I thought about doing it myself. Great job at adding all of the little extras in. I do wish you would have been a little clearer though. I was confused with whether it was dream or reality at some points. The comic as whole turned out great though! Excellent job!
Cedric, I really enjoyed looking at your comic. It was pretty funny. I really liked how you explored the different types of characters that toondoo offers. I especially liked the big head on the basketball court. I suggest that next time you place motion lines somewhere in your comic. When the character was playing basketball, you could have placed lines behind the image to show the speed/movement of the character. Great job presenting in class, and overall a great job!
I loved that you picked this urban legend! I thought about doing it myself. Great job at adding all of the little extras in. I do wish you would have been a little clearer though. I was confused with whether it was dream or reality at some points. The comic as whole turned out great though! Excellent job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Catherine. Narration needed on frames with no dialog and more proofreading on the grammar and mechanics.
ReplyDeleteCedric, I really enjoyed looking at your comic. It was pretty funny. I really liked how you explored the different types of characters that toondoo offers. I especially liked the big head on the basketball court. I suggest that next time you place motion lines somewhere in your comic. When the character was playing basketball, you could have placed lines behind the image to show the speed/movement of the character. Great job presenting in class, and overall a great job!
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