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Great story about Angie and her shadow man. I feel it ended a bit quickly with the shove in the water. Good command of grammar and mechanics except for a small apostrophe problem. I deducted 5 points for lateness.
This was good, and you will very good with the graphics. I agree with Mrs. Simpson, and how it ended, and i do want to add, that the setting seemed a bit too happy at the end, when its supposed to leave the reader terrified. Other than that, it was very good, and thorough!
Great story about Angie and her shadow man. I feel it ended a bit quickly with the shove in the water. Good command of grammar and mechanics except for a small apostrophe problem. I deducted 5 points for lateness.
ReplyDeleteThis was good, and you will very good with the graphics. I agree with Mrs. Simpson, and how it ended, and i do want to add, that the setting seemed a bit too happy at the end, when its supposed to leave the reader terrified. Other than that, it was very good, and thorough!
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